Edgar Allan Joe

Wow. I gotta say thats the best poem i've read so far in all my time as a member of the site (although it hasn't been very long). I enjoyed ...

I really loved that poem. I think it flowed very well. In response to Graffiti artist I do not think you should make the rest rhyme, that would ruin everything. ...

You know, I think the concept is good and all, but other than the corrections already made by Elinor Brynn I have one qualm. The peace is very, very clishe. ...

Overall I think its pretty good, but I have 1 suggestion. You don't need to do the repetition thing. Your poem would flow a lot better without that. Compare: I ...